doha by rahim

[Rajesh Kochhar]

SUPPOSE I change the first foot to:Barhon kaam ochhey karey?

-----From: Naseem Hines <nhines at ARTSCI.WUSTL.EDU>

>
: The Doha is a rhyming couplet, each of the two lines containing 24>matras.
Each line is further divided into two feet. The first and the third feet of
a hoda have 13 matras each and the second the fourth feet contain 11 matras
each.
>> > Ochhon kaam barhey karen,to na barhai hoye
>> > Jyon Rahim Hanumant ko, Giridhar kahe na koye.