Nice one, I like the touch of humour. To correct the metre in pāda b, I suggest यात्रिभिः सह/समम् .

Daniel

On Wed, 8 Apr 2020 at 09:01, Christian Ferstl via INDOLOGY <indology@list.indology.info> wrote:

एतदाश्चर्यमित्यूचुः श्रमणा यात्रिणश्चैव ।
यत्संप्रति गृहस्थत्वं सर्वलोकः समाश्रितः ॥

"This is astonishing", said the mendicants and pilgrims,
"that nowadays everyone has become a householder!"


Christian Ferstl


Am 07.04.2020 15:14, schrieb Madhav Deshpande via INDOLOGY:
> A distraction from the Coronavirus
>
> कोरोनां भीषणां दृष्ट्वा
> लङ्कां त्यक्त्वा बिभीषण: ।
>
> रामेण सहितोऽयोध्यां
> प्रायात् सोऽपि विचक्षण: ।।
>
> Seeing the frightening Corona, the wise Bibhishana, leaving Lanka,
> also went to Ayodhya along with Rama.
>
> Madhav M. Deshpande
> Professor Emeritus, Sanskrit and Linguistics
> University of Michigan, Ann Arbor, Michigan, USA
> Senior Fellow, Oxford Center for Hindu Studies
>
> [Residence: Campbell, California, USA]
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