doha by rahim

[SuryaPrakash Sharma]

--- Rajesh Kochhar <rkk at NISTADS.RES.IN> wrote:
> There is a small book on Rahim, written by
> Vijayendra Snatak,and published by Sahitya
> Akademi,New Delhi,1990. It contains the following
> couplet by Rahim:
>
> Ochhon kaam barhey karen,to na barhai hoye
> Jyon Rahim Hanumant ko, Giridhar kahe na koye.
>
>
> Is the first line correct?
dear mr rk
the first line is not correct,it is not meeting with
the statement of second line.But the person who
wrought ,had gone long back,so who will there to
correct it?


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